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Immature Eyes

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I worked my butt off on this one, so don't steal. XD

Anyways this is any cat you want it to be, it's not exactly warriors in particular. But, it was an attempt at a Bengal cat.
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I think this has to be one of your best works yet, although there are some flaws. (Critique alert coming below, don't want some don't read or reply to it. c:)



First off, I'm noticing that the head is a bit too thick and chubby, unless it's a kitten and/or it's just fat. Just try thinning out the cheeks to the point where it reaches the muzzle. Secondly, the eyes. I love them, they're dazzling.. but too human-like. And, in a cat's eyes, you basically cannot see the white part. But they're nice-sized and round, and that's the good part of it. x3 Also, if you want to achieve at having a bengal cat, make the stripes a much darker shade of brown, almost to black, and have the back stripes instead zip through the neck and chest, not the back. On the spine, there should be small spots.
Although there are flaws, I think this is still a great piece of work done. The ears are nicely done, and I love the round, small muzzle. The background is eerie and calm, and I love the light filtering through the trees. The nice blend of green makes the forest less vivid (in a good way), and the blurry contrast from the cat to the tree and beyond is done nicely. I love the darker shades of fur color for the feline, as it truly shows a good example of shading.


Nice work, Splatterz. I hope you can keep up the awesome submits to DA. c: